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 From:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)  
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I have been finishing off my website over the past few months (there are still some bugs to work out though).

 

But have been slapping up a few Source & Experiment stuff. check it out here

 

for anyone interested in some flash stuff check it out
there is some papervision stuff there too.


AKA Benn has it really been (8 years)
www.bennraistrick.co.uk
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 From:  99% of gargoyles look like (MR_BASTARD)  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.2 In reply to 34816.1 
Looks pretty, but the copy needs a bit of work. Proper spelling, punctuation and grammar would make it look more professional. For example, just one paragraph:
(I was) Born in Hannover, Germany, in 1980 and then moved to England in 1985. Many years passed with several defining moments that don't warrant web auto biographical details (not sure that this adds anything at all), I studied at the Art & Design at Shipley College (or should that be the Art & Design College at Shipley?) in West Yorkshire before moving into a career of technical support and computer sales support. After finding that this was not really my calling, I began to learn HTML & Flash with the prospects of becoming a web designer.
That's not perfect, I know.

some things never change
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 From:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)  
 To:  99% of gargoyles look like (MR_BASTARD)     
34816.3 In reply to 34816.2 
Hmm thought I had spell checked it and grammer checked, must have re-uploaded an older version. Thanks alot if you see anything else would love to know, there is nothing worse than seeing bad grammer and im the king of it.

AKA Benn has it really been (8 years)
www.bennraistrick.co.uk
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 From:  dave (10_ROGUE)  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.4 In reply to 34816.3 

Only had a quick look (very nice by the way).

 

The introduction on the homepage reads a bit clumsily to me, it could do with either some punctuation or just restructuring a bit so it reads more clearly.

 

Maybe change it to :

 

hi and welcome to bennraistrick.co.uk
the home of media design and development
enter my world, where you will discover fresh and fantastic interactive media
please see for yourself

 

Only added 1 comma and separated the last line so it's more like whole sentences without changing the layout too much and changing it into "proper" sentences.

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 From:  af (CAER)  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.5 In reply to 34816.3 
How did you check it? With an automatic checker, or with a human being? Only, actual people are much better for proof-reading as they'll be able to spot things like logical inconsistencies, or incorrect words used.
Caer
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 From:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)  
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Just gone through my site with a nit comb, I never realized there were so many errors it does look a little shoddy, going to spend the rest of today getting my shit together.

 

Thanks for pointing this stuff out.


AKA Benn has it really been (8 years)
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 From:  af (CAER)  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.7 In reply to 34816.6 
It'd probably be better if you got somebody else to do it, cos you might read what it's sposed to say, rather than what it actually says.
Caer
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 From:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)  
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34816.8 
my girlfriend is going to go over it for me, she is like the grammer police

AKA Benn has it really been (8 years)
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 From:  william  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.9 In reply to 34816.8 
Doh I'm sorry - I just can't help it - I must be missing Rendle:

"Grammar"
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 From:  Rowan  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.10 In reply to 34816.1 
Doesn't seem to work in Firefox 3 / Ubuntu. Sorry!
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 From:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)  
 To:  Rowan     
34816.11 In reply to 34816.10 
I am a bit dubious about installing firefox 3 as I wot be able to test for firefox 2 if I do, and as a web designer/developer I need to make sure I reach the most popular browser audience, which is annoying really as IE6 still has 35% uk audience and IE7 and firefox 2 control the rest.

AKA Benn has it really been (8 years)
www.bennraistrick.co.uk
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 From:  Peter (BOUGHTONP)  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.12 In reply to 34816.11 
quote:
which is annoying really as IE6 still has 35% uk audience


Yeah, IE6 is a huge pain in the arse, I'd happily ignore it if it didn't still have such a huge userbase. :/
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 From:  Rowan  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.13 In reply to 34816.11 

Aye, fair enough. FF3 on Linux isn't the most common set-up.

 

And, yes, IE6 is a hugely irritating. I spent the last week making things work (or not-break so much) in it. Sigh.

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 From:  Matt  
 To:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)     
34816.14 In reply to 34816.11 
Right now I can't reach on Windows or Ubuntu, but when it was working earlier, for what it's worth at least, it was working ok in FF3 on Windows.

There was an slight hiccup the first time I opened it, where everything was in plaintext like the CSS was switched off, but that seems to be resolved now. I'll write that one off as you possibly tinkering with the site as I was loading it.

On Ubuntu FF3 it gives me this error if it's any help:

code:
uncaught exception: script.aculo.us requires the Prototype JavaScript framework >= 1.4.0

doohicky

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 From:  Kane (RAI_KANE3)  
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It seems i'm having hosting issues ontop of trying to debug all the errors in my site, damn fasthost (I know, i know dont say anything they were cheap).

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